Whats In A Name Erased - Revision history

Al at 12:42, 1 September 2008

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Al at 11:11, 1 September 2008

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Al at 09:30, 1 September 2008

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azrael at 17:57, 26 May 2004

2004-05-26T17:57:56Z

Al: typos, spellings, and generall formating hackery

2004-05-09T13:54:33Z

typos, spellings, and generall formating hackery

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Azrael: typo

2004-05-09T10:47:35Z

typo

Stuart at 22:42, 8 May 2004

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Stuart at 22:40, 8 May 2004

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Stuart at 22:33, 8 May 2004

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Stuart at 22:23, 8 May 2004

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 *[[Blaze]] and [[Pins]] dare each to go downstairs to the [[Sub Basement]]. As they head up, a [[zombie]] claws it's way through a wall and heads towards them. [[Pins]] shoots a burst ([[Savlette Guardian]]) and clips the [[zombie]], rounds hitting the walls ignite the basement and it explodes. [[Pins]] grabs [[Blaze]] and runs out with her.
 *[[Wendy Winters]] running name: Hermione - calls [[Shade]] and asks if he has any work. [[The Group]] note this, then ignore it. They like her, therefore don't want to run with her (The [[NPCs Always Die]] law).
-*Team head to [[Carl Sanchez]]'s and [[Shade]] opens the back fire door via decking. They get the lift up. On the relevant floor they meet a dwarf ([[Hamish Mc Handles]]) fixing a fuse box.
+*Team head to [[Carl Sanchez]]'s and [[Shade]] opens the back fire door via decking. They get the lift up. On the relevant floor they meet a dwarf ([[Hamish McHandles]]) fixing a fuse box.
 ==== Monday 8th May 2062, 2pm ====

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 *[[Shade]] decks into the home of [[Carl Sanchez]] and looks through the cameras.
 *[[Blaze]] and [[Pins]] dare each to go downstairs to the [[Sub Basement]]. As they head up, a [[zombie]] claws it's way through a wall and heads towards them. [[Pins]] shoots a burst ([[Savlette Guardian]]) and clips the [[zombie]], rounds hitting the walls ignite the basement and it explodes. [[Pins]] grabs [[Blaze]] and runs out with her.
-*[[Wendy Winters]] running name: Hermione - calls [[Shade]] and asks if he has any work. [[The Group]] note this, then ignore it. They like her, therefore don't want to run with her (The [[NP Cs Always Die]] law).
+*[[Wendy Winters]] running name: Hermione - calls [[Shade]] and asks if he has any work. [[The Group]] note this, then ignore it. They like her, therefore don't want to run with her (The [[NPCs Always Die]] law).
 *Team head to [[Carl Sanchez]]'s and [[Shade]] opens the back fire door via decking. They get the lift up. On the relevant floor they meet a dwarf ([[Hamish Mc Handles]]) fixing a fuse box.

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 == Monday 8th May 2062, about midday ==
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 *[[Gavilan Ventures]]
 *[[Bellevue Financial Investments]]

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 *[[Shade]]'s room has a nice sickly alcohol smell here. It's quite disgusting.
 *As [[Blaze]] and [[Pins]] go to leave the lights go off in the corridor. [[Blaze]] guides [[Pins]] to the stairs, and notices that some stairs also go down to a Sub Basement. She goes up.
-*[[Shade]] searches for [[Carl Sanchez]] and finds a link to [[Dunkelzahns]]'s Will- Carl was left a ''small token of his appreciation''.
+*[[Shade]] searches for [[Carl Sanchez]] and finds a link to [[Dunkelzahn]]'s Will- Carl was left a ''small token of his appreciation''.
 *[[Shade]] decks into the home of [[Carl Sanchez]] and looks through the cameras.
 *[[Blaze]] and [[Pins]] dare each to go downstairs to the [[Sub Basement]]. As they head up, a [[zombie]] claws it's way through a wall and heads towards them. [[Pins]] shoots a burst ([[Savlette Guardian]]) and clips the [[zombie]], rounds hitting the walls ignite the basement and it explodes. [[Pins]] grabs [[Blaze]] and runs out with her.

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 *[[Shade]] searches for [[Carl Sanchez]] and finds a link to [[Dunkelzahns]]'s Will- Carl was left a small token of his appreciation.
 *[[Shade]] decks into the hoome of [[Carl Sanchez]] and looks through the cameras.
-*[[Blaze]] and [[Pins]] dare each to go downstairs to sub-basement. As they head up, a [[zombie]] claws it's way through a wall and heads towards them. [[Pins]] shootrs a burst ([[Savlette Guardian]]) and clips the [[zombie]], rounds hitting the walls ignite the basement and it explodes. [[Pins]] grabs [[Blaze]] and runs out with her.
+*[[Blaze]] and [[Pins]] dare each to go downstairs to sub-basement. As they head up, a [[zombie]] claws it's way through a wall and heads towards them. [[Pins]] shoots a burst ([[Savlette Guardian]]) and clips the [[zombie]], rounds hitting the walls ignite the basement and it explodes. [[Pins]] grabs [[Blaze]] and runs out with her.
 *[[Wendy Winters]] running name: Hermione - calls [[Shade]] and asks if he has any work.
 *Team head to [[Carl Sanchez]]'s and [[Shade]] opens backdoor via decking. They get lift up. On the relevant floor they meet a dwarf ([[Hamish Mc Handles]]) fixing a fuse box.
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 *He recently visited [[Wards R Us]] matrix site, and checked property pages.
 *[[Shade]] checks recordings of the other group going to Carl's and he sends footage to [[Mr Sommers]] to try and work out what's going on: fee 500 upfront.
-*[[Shade]] decks property companies (that he visited) and we narrow possibilities to [[Puyullup]] and [[Redmond]] (Paula Redgrave - from an apartment, Martin Smith -telecom unit redmond), 2 places that paid using certified cred rather than real id.
+*[[Shade]] decks property companies (that Carl visited) and we narrow possibilities to [[Puyallup]] and [[Redmond]] (Paula Redgrave - from an apartment, Martin Smith -telecom unit redmond), 2 places that paid using certified cred rather than real id.
 *He edits the records to list them as hired with real ids and not certified credsticks.
 *[[Shade]] hacks records and gets us an apartment 2 floors up from 'Martin Smith'
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 ==== Monday 8th May 2062, 7pm ====
-*[[Mr Sommers]] rings back, Carl's 'holding company bank' is owned by [[Gavallin Ventures]], formally owned by [[Dunkelzahn]] and now owned by [[Nadja Daviar]].
+*[[Mr Sommers]] rings back, Carl's 'holding company bank' is owned by [[Gavilan Ventures]], formally owned by [[Dunkelzahn]] and now owned by [[Nadja Daviar]].
 *Team head to new apartment, and pay local gang a protection fee for the car.
 *[[Blaze]] is in van as [[Shade]] and [[Pins]] check out their own apartment.
 *[[Blaze]] spots the enemy mage (British guy), and she spots the Ork getting snatched. She follows in [[Pins]]' van.
 *[[Pins]]/[[Shade]] check out [[Carl Sanchez]]'s apartment, it was warded, lots of empty bottles, possibly explaining Carl's trip out - perhaps restocking.
-*[[Shade]] and [[Pins]] 'bribe' the gang to find a car they are not protecting - and steal a form american. Driving to meet [[Blaze]], pausing to let a [[zombie]] out of the boot.
+*[[Shade]] and [[Pins]] 'bribe' the gang to find a car they are not protecting - and steal a Ford [[Ameri Car]]. Driving to meet [[Blaze]], pausing to let a [[zombie]] out of the boot.
 *Team all get back together at the place where rival team have got Carl. Their team is: 3 trench coats, 1 decker(female), 1 (mage)
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 *[[Shade]] decks the rivals apartment block, and locates their apartment.
-*[[Shade]] receives call from [[Mr Sommers]], he has ID trace on the rivals from the pictures we gave him, [[Mr Cadwell]] - operative for yamatetsu North america. he's a corp security mage. fee additional 500.
+*[[Shade]] receives call from [[Mr Sommers]], he has ID trace on the rivals from the pictures we gave him, [[Mr Cadwell]] - operative for [[Yamatetsu North America]]. He's a corp security mage. fee additional 500.
 *[[Shade]] sees through cameras, that [[Mr Cadwell]] has left, driving off with eurocar westwind. Then another one of the suits heading out, visits quickie mart.
 *Team decide to take that opportunity to head in.
-*[[Shade]] decks in to control cameras, and is almost spotted by enemy decker, just manages to avoid her.
+*[[Shade]] decks in to control cameras, and is not spotted by enemy decker.
 *[[Shade]] doesn't spot her either.
 *[[Shade]] opens backdoor, disables panic buttons, and loops cameras.
 *[[Pins]] on point, team head to 17th floor, then walk down to 15th floor.
-*Team fail to spot camcoreder before it spots them.
+*Team fail to spot micro-camcorder before it spots them.
-*Fire elemental (bad) shimmersd into the corridor.
+*Fire elemental (bad) shimmers into the corridor.
 *[[Pins]] runs down corridor, as Elemental starts attacking [[Blaze]].
 *[[Blaze]] fights the  [[Fire Elemental]], and barely shrugs off the attack.
 *[[Pins]] arrives at the end of the corridor, turns around and watches the door.
 *[[Goon]] 1 opens the door, [[Pins]] fires a burst at the door, and misses.
-*Goon replies with a shoot of his own at [[Pins]]. Another goon appears at the door, but cannot shoot past his fellow good.
+*Goon replies with a shoot of his own at [[Pins]]. Another goon appears at the door, but cannot shoot past his fellow goon.
 *[[Shade]] takes a couple of steps and shoots his shotgun at the Goons in the doorway. He misses.
-*[[Blaze]] commands three elementals to attack the [[Fire Elemental]] infront of him, and three to attack the people in the room who aren't the guy they want, nor any of his own team. Also they should kill any mage there first.
+*[[Blaze]] commands three elementals to attack the [[Fire Elemental]] infront of him, and three to attack the people in the room excepting the guy they want, nor any of his own team. Also they should kill any mage there first.
 *The elementals all manifest.
 *Two of the elementals (Alpha, Beta) attack and destroy the elemental. Gamma has nothing to do.
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 *He says that when he was 14 a strange guy came up to him and said we'll give you a million nuyen if we can bind a spirit for one year, so it could live as him. To learn what it was like to be in his situation. She was a powerful spirit who didn't have much respect for humanity and he did it to teach her a lesson.  He bound her for the year, and she couldn't do anything, apart from experience it.
 *[[Mr Cadwell]] pulled the memory from his mind.
-*Group finds out that [[Mr Cadwell]] wanted the true name of the spirit - [[Butter Cup]]. He can use this information he can bind, neutralising her.
+*Group finds out that [[Mr Cadwell]] wanted the true name of the spirit - [[Butter Cup]]. He can use this information to bind and neutralis her.
 *Group phones [[Mr Johnson]] and tells him what he knows. he offers an additional 30k, which is 40k for each person.
 *[[Mr Johnson]] finds out [[Mr Cadwell]] has access the companies magical library. [[Mr Johnson]] will only pay if we can stop [[Mr Cadwell]] binding her.
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 *Shot gate, van skid, [[Blaze]] blows warehouse doors, [[Pins]] drives through, see mage inside physical barrier.
-*[[Pins]] fires 2 bursts ([[Sav Guard]]) through barrier, he uses combat pool and karma to dodge.
+*[[Pins]] fires 2 bursts ([[Savlette Guardian]]) through barrier, he uses combat pool and karma to dodge.
 *[[Shade]] takes 2 shots with combat shotgun, first 'hits' and scatters away, second burst 'hits' with 2 to the chest, 12S damage, soaked by his armour.
 *Van then hits barrier which takes moderate damage
 *[[Mr Cadwell]] tries to bind Buttercup - and fails
 *Van stopped when hitting barrier, and so [[Pins]] doesn't need to do a control test.
-*[[Pins]] takes a burst, rolls 3sixes on 3 damage dice, killing him.
+*[[Pins]] shoots a burst at [[Mr Cadwell]], rolls 3sixes on 3 damage dice, killing him.
 *[[Blaze]] loots a rating 6 conjuring foci
 *[[Buttercup]] is pleased to have been rescued in the nick of time, but says that we should not be allowed to remember what happened, and waves her hand in front of our eyes (Cast a high force stunball), and we fall unconcious.
 She wipes the minds of the whole team, and they wake up in a hotel. the next day 1pm in Seattle hilton.

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 == Organizations and Corporations ==
-*[[Gavalin Ventures]]
+*[[Gavilan Ventures]]
 *[[Bellevue Financial Investments]]